Active vs. Passive Voice: How to Write with Maximum Impact
Transform sluggish sentences into direct, punchy prose by identifying and mastering active voice construction.
Active vs. Passive Voice: How to Write with Maximum Impact
In active voice, the subject of the sentence performs the action. In passive voice, the subject receives the action.
Comparison:
- Passive: The ball was kicked by Sarah. (Weak, wordy)
- Active: Sarah kicked the ball. (Punchy, direct)
When is Passive Voice Acceptable?
- When the actor is unknown: "The ancient temple was built in 400 BC."
- In scientific or lab reporting where the outcome matters more than the researcher.